Chủ Nhật, 22 tháng 11, 2009

FRIENDSHIP
Friendship is important to us ; therefore, every one needs friendship. In all our lives, we cannot live without friendship just as we cannot survive without air and water. Friendship gives us a feeling of security and warmth ; furthermore, friendship encourages us to go ahead all the time.
It's difficult to find a true friendship ; therefore, real friendship must be sincere and unconditional. It bases on mutual understanding, not on mutual benefit. Some people try to get something from their friends ; infact, it can't be called friendship.
Nhu is my close friend, and I have been acquainted with her since we were students at University. She is a honest person, so I always believe in her. She always cares of everyone, so I think that she is a gentle girl.
The mutual understanding between 2 friends need similiar ideas and trust. She has to be with me when I have troubles or problems ; moreover, she helps me to overcome. She also has to listen and gives me advices. As an old saying : " A friend in need is a indeed firend."
It's also neccessary to have many good friends. A good friend can be a good teacher to us, so they help us to the right way, overcome many difficulties. I think that friendship easily breaks up ; consequently, we don't care enough together. A bad friend can betray you ; however, a good friend can help you all the time. We are also aware of the danger of doing wrong. The more friends we have the more help we can expect from them.
The end!

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  1. Dear Quynh,
    First of all, I think this sentence " It's difficult to find a true friendship ; therefore, real friendship must be sincere and unconditional " you should write " real friendship must be sincere and unconditional; therefore, It's difficult to find a true friendship". If you had written like that, the readers could have understood clearly because they know why true friendship is difficult to find.
    About this sentence: " I think that friendship easily breaks up ; consequently, we don't care enough together", i think it can cause a misunderstand. Maybe, the reader will think that because friendship easily breaks up, they don't need to care abot their friends. It's better to write " I think that friendship easily breaks up ; consequently, we need to care enough together"

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