In my inquiry what my this first sacredness in the world shall reply that is mother 's heart.My family has three people:my parent and me(1).I'm sad because I have neither brothers nor sisters,I am the only child.however,I know my mother always understands and shares concerment servant.She is the most excellent women person at which I'm known.Her name 's Nhi(4).She is 50 years old(4).
My mother is a good teacher(5).Every morning,she gets up most early to prepare for breakfast(3).Later,she transfers me to school and teaches professed(2).In the afternoon,she goes to market then cooks quickly.Everybody in my family has blissful family meals all the time.
My mother does the cooking very palatably(4).She reproaches and construes for me known how I'm already wrong.my mother and me almost never have confidential.we always have very outgoing talk speeches.She is accommodation virtuous but also very rigorous.I love my mother so much(1).
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Trả lờiXóa"She is the most excellent women person at which I'm known"
Trả lờiXóa~> when you use "person", do not u "women" and in contrast, and remember, your mother is only a "woman" not "women".
"Her name 's Nhi"
~> when you write an essay, you should better write clearly, such as "Her name is Nhi", it will make readers, especially teachers feel pleased.
"Every morning,she gets up most early to prepare for breakfast(3)"
~> "early" is a short adj, so it must be "the earliest".
Try your best :)